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Hello everyone,

I've been rewriting the ending of "Emily and Alyssa" and was wondering what kind of end you guys would like to see.

So far I have written one where Alyssa shrinks Emily and then humiliates her by putting her in her old doll house and crushing it with her tits, while Em is trapped inside.  Followed by eating her (of course).
Part of me just wants Alyssa to swallow her while she orgasms.  Or maybe to tie her up and dress her up as food and eat her bit by bit.

Oooo, or maybe Alyssa keeps her promise, gives her 4 foot tits, 10 feet tall, and a 3 foot ass.  Alyssa leaves herself at 5'10" with only one foot breasts ('only', ha).  Then when Emily either tries to get revenge or get comfort after her traumatising event.  But then Alyssa turns her to chocolate and slowly eats her alive.  Or maybe Alyssa just eats her, no chocolate involved... Hardvore?  Slurp her in by her own entrails.  Heehee

Anyway, do you guys have any ideas of how the story should end?  Any alterations you would make?  I want to hear em!
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Frakass has posted a ton of new drawings and doodles! If you like vore (or BE, he does that too) I HIGHLY suggest you look up his gallery ^^

Update:
He's on DA now!
:iconfrakass:
I still HIGHLY suggest you check out his NON-DA account!
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Teasing nature

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Okay, so I am sure who ever is reading this has read my story "Alisa - The empty belly." Well something has happened recently that just seems to want to tease me.  The beginning of the story Alisa never feels full, she then goes to her doctor, well IRL my girl friend has been eating... but not feeling full... She also is going to the doctor to see what the diagnosis is.  If only we lived together and I was an accountant... :P
Anyways, I thought I would share that :)
Hope everyone is having a great summer! :D
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Hello wondrous viewers.
I am sorry I haven't released any other stories yet, I have been away on travels and have been "Distracted" since i got back. But distractions lead somewhere and I have made a couple things to share, I'll see if I'm lazy enough to not put them up.
,Doni
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